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I long for a life of not a single responsibility, but your precious frail heart.

As we'll stumble upon each other, like onto an atlas of a forgotten district - you'll appreciate the lines on my face for they are an estuary of an ancient river, and I'll cherish the working blisters on your strong hands for they stood  out proud of their diligence.
I haven't any other propositions. Affections shouldn't be afflictions, they should be easy and painless, smooth and transparent.
Complexity's never on the table.
Perfection of Monotony is.
Bon Appétit
when people are straightforward
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful. I can definitely relate to the premise.
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Sjemenka Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much for the fave and a nice comment.
glad you liked it. :)
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ThyPoetSorcerer Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you welcome.
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apricots-and-coffee Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Interesting premise! "Perfection of Monotony" isn't usually considered the poetic ideal, but you argued your case well.
I especially like "onto an atlas of a forgotten district" and "they are an estuary of an ancient river."
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Sjemenka Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Something about the routine always appealed me. How genuinely peaceful and calmingly unsurprising it can be. :)
thank you so much for the fave and a lovely comment.
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apricots-and-coffee Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
I can understand that. And you're welcome!
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